Mmm. Had a thought, and maybe this would help the confusion in an individual chapter, and keep the Master from pouting about the story being rearranged to chronological order.
When going back to expand the scenes (and right at the moment, I think I'll expand the Torchwood scene, let the Master torment the Doctor a bit more), instead of keeping the three that are in this chapter, leave the last one with the Doctor and Marka for another chapter (or another story, perhaps).
It'll still probably be a bit confusing, because the Master and Jack aren't exactly writing in order. But the second chapter has their arrival at Torchwood (1973, about seventy years after their arrival on Earth from the end of the universe), and the Doctor en-route between Torchwood 1 and Torchwood 3, which if I expand the scene in the first chapter can follow pretty much on the heels of that one.
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When going back to expand the scenes (and right at the moment, I think I'll expand the Torchwood scene, let the Master torment the Doctor a bit more), instead of keeping the three that are in this chapter, leave the last one with the Doctor and Marka for another chapter (or another story, perhaps).
It'll still probably be a bit confusing, because the Master and Jack aren't exactly writing in order. But the second chapter has their arrival at Torchwood (1973, about seventy years after their arrival on Earth from the end of the universe), and the Doctor en-route between Torchwood 1 and Torchwood 3, which if I expand the scene in the first chapter can follow pretty much on the heels of that one.