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morgynleri) wrote2010-10-31 03:30 pm
morgynleri) wrote2010-10-31 03:30 pm
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More writing...
... and on the disposition of the Chorus of the story, and his continuing foolishness. In this case, I'm trying to remind myself that this is bloody well not a fairy tale, and firmly squashing one thought on where the details are going. Because I know the Chorus has the best intentions regarding his sister, and his actions are actually likely quite reasonable in light of the culture of the time. However, it's still making me want to facepalm a lot.
On the other hand, it's still going along, and I'm working my way through the reworked plot point with a thought on how I'm going to change the next major plot point. Because I'm thinking that it'll work better if I move the next one up in time a year. And will cause a lovely bit of trouble that can be solved by removing the Chorus from his current duties to the female lead. *is cheerfully plotting to cause a minor amount of havoc*
On the other hand, it's still going along, and I'm working my way through the reworked plot point with a thought on how I'm going to change the next major plot point. Because I'm thinking that it'll work better if I move the next one up in time a year. And will cause a lovely bit of trouble that can be solved by removing the Chorus from his current duties to the female lead. *is cheerfully plotting to cause a minor amount of havoc*