Ah, that's really good - you've got the mud and exhaustion so well; Montjoye is empathetic enough to feel it strongly even from his postion far above the battle. A nice look into his heart, too; not a comfortable siuation for a French herald to be in at Agincourt!
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Date: 2011-11-27 06:24 am (UTC)