Mmm, fascinating idea. The non-linear storytelling really works here. And I enjoyed the way Melina and Jack turned out to be old friends (honestly, is there anyone Jack hasn't met before? *g*).
But like donutsweeper says, you can't just leave it there! What was her life's work?????
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Date: 2007-10-31 09:38 pm (UTC)But like